Awesome Land! Discussion Room/Rules/References

[Sartorius]

Aug 7, 2008 20:05:29 GMT -5 Mizagium said:

I want in!
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Name: Johnny Mambutoo O'Malley

Age: 21

Description/Appearance/Personality: Tall, handsome, with short brown hair and green eyes. He thinks himself superior to and better looking than others. He is stuck up and dismisses most comments to him as the ravings of ugly people. When someone annoys him too much, he beats them with the Ugly Stick.

Weapon: The Ugly Stick (When he beats people with it, they become ugly)

Powers: Turning people ugly, Turning them back, his Ugly Stick glows when ugly people are near.

Career: Ex- Male Model for Abercrombie. Currently employed as the male model of McJimmy's

Other: He stumbled upon Awesome Land when an older gentleman lured him into a portal offering a modeling contract and candy.

It's good to see that people still have imagination in this planet. You're accepted, but use the Ugly Stick sparingly. Also, I'm assuming the weapon only works on people, and not robots and the like.

[Sartorius]

Aug 7, 2008 20:09:30 GMT -5 Anthony G said:

Tyler, I think when ugly people are near his Ugly Stick should start glowing


And yeah Austin, I was being serious. Was my description bad? Also, your characer used to work at McJimmy's. I need to know what kind of store/restuarant/service McJimmy's was so this can make sense.

Yea, Veralice worked at McJimmy's. The skills he learned there attributed to his becoming emperor. Your description was fine, just...unexpected. McJimmy's is a five star gourmet fast food restaurant located in the heart of Awesome Land!

[Sartorius]

Aug 7, 2008 22:08:54 GMT -5 Xero said:

Aug 7, 2008 15:18:41 GMT -5 Sartorius said:

4: Use proper grammar/punctuation. You are in school now (except Jason). You have no excuse for typing like this: "so guys i was liek on my wei to a howse when bob came and attakd me."

Can we use weird 1337 grammar in quotations? Just leave the story in normal grammar to make it simple and easy to understand, but let quotes be as weird and complicated as you want. Just to make it funnier.

If you make your character speak, you may use "1337" to a certain extent to make the story funnier. If it gets out of hand, however, I will let you know. I'm not sure how this affects your character as it is a robot .

[Mizagium]

I'll give him another weapon then... no, one more ability.

Please refer to above description.

[Sartorius]

Aug 7, 2008 20:12:19 GMT -5 Mizagium said:

Yes it should, but he instead of Johnny Mambutoo O'Malley having worked for McJimmy, McJimmy lured the aforementioned ex-male model into Awesome Land with promises of a modeling contract and candy.

Also, what is all this gonna amount to?

This is going to amount to the greatest story ever written on this forum (aside from The Legend of Bob, of course.) That's why I need to drain the imaginations of all who join.

[Mizagium]

Are you gonna post it here? Like in this same thread?

[Sartorius]

I could. It really all depends. I have an auxiliary forum that I could use for this story/game or I could just keep it here. It all depends.

[Mizagium]

Did, you see, I updated my characters abilities.

[Sartorius]

Character additions and modifications noted. Will add to character list along with Mykal's Robot

[Mizagium]

Who first thought up McJimmy (the restaraunt)?

[Sartorius]

Aug 8, 2008 14:42:25 GMT -5 Mizagium said:

Who first thought up McJimmy (the restaraunt)?

That would be me.

[Mizagium]

YOU HAVE OPENED A VARIATION OF PANDORA'S BOCKS

[Xero]

McJimmy's should just be a mediocre fast food restaurant. Nobody really likes the food, but it's the only restaurant not taken by Veralice, so it's the only place left to eat. Yet it still gets a maximum of seven customers an hour... out of the total population of... you guessed it: IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!

[Mizagium]

I like that.

[Sartorius]

I will keep the suggestions handy, then, and perhaps implement them into the thread. Anyway, if anyone would like to actually begin the story, you may. This is what the average post should be like:

Emperor Veralice awoke from his over 9000 story palace with an evil expression on his face. He knew that to secure total control of Awesome Land that he would have to take over McJimmy's, the best (and only) restaurant in the country/territory/alternate dimension. Veralice teleported out of the castle and onto the roof of McJimmy's to ensure that no one was there to stop his plan.

(There's the first post. Someone could respond by going to McJimmy's or something.)

[Mizagium]

I think it should be in another thread but...

Johnny Mambutoo O'Malley waited outside McJimmy's. He was supposed to "stand there and look pretty" as commanded by McJimmy. Instead he was slumped down on the ground. No one was coming. They had been open for 2 hours and not a single customer was coming. Then his Ugly Stick began to glow...

[Mizagium]

off topic, but how did u change the title of this thread?

[Sartorius]

You can copy and paste your post in the other thread. I've taken your advice and separated them.

[Mizagium]

Aug 8, 2008 15:39:49 GMT -5 Mizagium said:

off topic, but how did u change the title of this thread?

ANSWER ME!!

[Mizagium]

we need to wait for BBQ to write for McJimmy.

[Sartorius]

Yep. HURRY BBQ McJimmy is waiting to say something!!! And does he have a first name? Although technically I should know since I made the restaurant and thus the character.

[Xero]

lol McJimmy's is like the Pokemon Centers: identical twins/triplets/quadruplets/whatever-lets, all with the same name, running a chain of restaurants. All mediocre, of course.

[Mizagium]

Yeah and Brock hits on all of them... ONLY TO BE SHOT DOWN BY ALL OF THEM!!!

[Xero]

LOLOL WHO WANTS TO BE BROCK?

[Anthony G]

New rule - When writing something other than the actual story, we should use parenthesis so we can distinguish what we're saying and what the story is.

Also, I think my name should be Jimmy McJimmy.