Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 0:00:07 GMT -5
lolol I feel like I'm pretty much running Awesome Land with my half-page posts.... of course, that always puts me the "furtherest" (lol Mote Quote) behind in the plot since the story advances so much while I'm typing.
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Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 0:06:19 GMT -5
Okay, well, I'm going to bed so I can be awake for my ultimate failure tomorrow:
LOLZ I'M TESTING FOR MY PERMIT..... A MONTH AND TWO YEARS LATE.
AND I HAVEN'T STUDIED FOR THE TEST. LOL I'M GONNA FAIL
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Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 0:11:09 GMT -5
By the way, Xero is about to discover the Corpsvettes. LOLZ (Corps = two or more divisions; division = two or more regiments or brigades = 20000-30000 men.... which means corps = 40000-60000 men...... LOL TYRANNY IS DOOMED)
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 11:29:42 GMT -5
Name:Leutenant Duncan
Age:18
Description/Appearance/Personality:Duncan is the most skilled sniper in the 501st if you need somone assasinated he and his squad are the go to guys
Weapon:a high caliber lazer sniper rifle, switch blade in right glove
Powers: duncan has the power to enspire others
Career: commando
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 11:33:35 GMT -5
Name: Fleet Admaral Gustav
Age:30
Description/Appearance/Personality: one of the only non-clones in the service. he is brash and cold. likes to blow things up with his orbital canons
Weapon:standard issue pistol
Powers:n/a
Career:admaral
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Mizagium
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Judge. Jury. Executioner.
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Post by Mizagium on Sept 18, 2008 11:59:56 GMT -5
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Post by Sartorius on Sept 18, 2008 12:02:14 GMT -5
Lol The Palace of Excellence. That name is full of win.
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Mizagium
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Post by Mizagium on Sept 18, 2008 12:04:15 GMT -5
i no rite?
i'm making more pages today.
Projects:
Sarah Mambutoo O'Malley
RIDLEY(neo, OMEGA, and CHRONO)
Really Cool Land
Groovy Land
The War of Four Kings
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 12:10:01 GMT -5
if there is no objections im going to blow up the clock tower now
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Mizagium
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Post by Mizagium on Sept 18, 2008 12:11:00 GMT -5
Okay. Veralice and Johnny/Shaodw are now in a standoff.
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Mizagium
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Post by Mizagium on Sept 18, 2008 12:42:57 GMT -5
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 13:05:31 GMT -5
mr. whatsarobi needs to get on because our plot lines are intertwinded
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Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 16:56:23 GMT -5
lol Enter Jacob Throop. Guess who's next?
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Post by Duke Nukem on Sept 18, 2008 18:18:24 GMT -5
JESUS!  !??! |
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Post by Duke Nukem on Sept 18, 2008 20:51:47 GMT -5
LT. Duncan awoke tied to a tree, he had no idea where he was. he looked to his left and his right three clone troopers were tied with him all of them dazed and confused. He sprung his glove blade out and cut the rope, the three clone troopers immediately ran in separate directions. He stood there for a moment to asses (That really should be assess) the situation. He saw the large building where there seemed to have a lot of noise coming from it. "thats a good starting place as any" he said He went to the mess hall and sneaked into the rafters over looking the Corpvets meeting. when all of the sudden the wooden beam he was standing on collapsed, and he was on the floor in the middle of the meeting. all eyes were upon him (fixed lucco) (There were so many typographical errors and grammatical errors here that I had to correct them. The worst one is in bold for you.) That typo deserves a medal. |
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 21:11:01 GMT -5
That post (Justin's post with all the typos) was filled with so many paradoxes, I can't continue until he clears everything up. (LOL WUT? The mess hall is the dining hall on a ship. Cha Cha and the captains of the ships in the Special Royal Navy were meeting in the mess hall of the FLAG SHIP, the Lauren. The Corpsvets are in the middle of the woods sitting around a campfire.... OUTSIDE.) He went to the mess hall and sneaked into the rafters over looking the Corpvets meeting. when all of the sudden the wooden beam he was standing on collapsed, and he was on the floor in the middle of the meeting. all eyes were upon him (HOW DID HE END UP ON A WOODEN BEAM ABOVE THE MEETING?!!??!!?!??!?11??1!!!??) |
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 21:17:25 GMT -5
That post (Justin's post with all the typos) was filled with so many paradoxes, I can't continue until he clears everything up. (LOL WUT? The mess hall is the dining hall on a ship. Cha Cha and the captains of the ships in the Special Royal Navy were meeting in the mess hall of the FLAG SHIP, the Lauren. The Corpsvets are in the middle of the woods sitting around a campfire.... OUTSIDE.) (HOW DID HE END UP ON A WOODEN BEAM ABOVE THE MEETING?!!??!!?!??!?11??1!!!??) ok so this is where the paradoxes came from mykal you switched settings without any warning in your mega post today, and i thought that cha cha xero and phantom were together in the same place and messhall made me think, ohh there in a messhall at the corpvets camp how im going to fix this: delete entire paradox post |
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Post by Duke Nukem on Sept 18, 2008 21:21:22 GMT -5
Asses = Assess = favorite typo ever other than paid/laid mixup
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Post by Duke Nukem on Sept 18, 2008 21:28:22 GMT -5
I think I should make a new charater for kicks and giggles...
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Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 21:31:13 GMT -5
I thought that was what Narrator was for?
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Xero
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Post by Xero on Sept 18, 2008 21:40:51 GMT -5
Okay, just to clear things up:
Cha Cha, Narrator, Salvatore, Lacquer, Queen Lauren (of Special Land), and all the captains of the Special Royal Navy are in the mess hall on the Royal flagship, the Lauren. This is in the ocean between Ausum Land and Awesome Land. These men are NOT in the Null Void. That's what they just spent half a page avoiding, and what they're discussing right now. Also, Narrator can't STILL be in the Captain's pose, since he was moved into the mess hall of the Lauren. He was in the Captain's pose above decks in the front (the bow) of the Poltergeist. But I'm just being picky.
Xero, Phantom, Jacob, Duncan, and the Corpsvets are in the Awesome Woods at the Corpsvet camp (outside around a campfire). Phantom is out cold, Xero is in a sling, and Duncan and his three clone soldiers are still tied to the tree.
CHRONO RIDLEY is still outside of the Null Void, firing Void-rays and the smaller ships from the Special Royal Navy.
Johnny, (Void)-Sarah, Veralice, and Dante are all in some random place in the woods.
The Really Cool Army, led by General Tamwyn, somehow managed to reach Awesome Land before the Phantom Regiment, and they managed to slip into Awesome Land before CHRONO RIDLEY swallowed Awesome Land (figuratively). General Corinth is with the rest of the RCA outside of the Null Void staring in amazement at the BLACK (black, Tyler, not white) whole that now stood where Awesome Land had been moments before.
As things move along, feel free to add summaries so we all know what's going on. Maybe someone could make a character position thread so we know where everyone is at all times (unless they randomly disappear like Cha Cha did in Season 1, and like Johnny did earlier in Season 2).
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Post by Duke Nukem on Sept 18, 2008 22:25:00 GMT -5
Michael, can't you just start putting your super posts into the story in short installments one after the other so you don't have to check and alter everything before/after you post it?
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 22:34:05 GMT -5
because then it wouldnt be as epic
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Post by Justice Bringer on Sept 18, 2008 22:37:22 GMT -5
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Post by Sartorius on Sept 18, 2008 22:39:37 GMT -5
Holy potato that is strangely uncanny. If it weren't for the fact that the T-shirt costs 23 dollars I would have to buy that.
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